Comments on: Story: Strictly fictitious

By: LianYL

LianYL — Mon, 04 Sep 2006 16:54:48 +0000

ok my sleepiness has made me type some mistakes… zzzzzzzzzzzz

By: tj han

tj han — Mon, 04 Sep 2006 16:54:30 +0000

LOL. I barely wrote any stories since p6. And back in primary school all I wrote about was gunfights in the mold of Black Lagoon.

Sec sch and JC were all argumentative.

And Cheryl.. lol.

By: LianYL

LianYL — Mon, 04 Sep 2006 16:54:13 +0000

Since you wanted comments on it, ok then. Here ’s what I think.

It’s very conventional. It’s the kind of plot twist you’ll think of right at the start of the essay. And even if you hadn’t thought of it, the twist won’t affect much. But of course, it’s a Sec 4 work. Most Sec 4s right like that.

I wrote worse stuff in Sec 4. Even my Chinese sucked badly then. Or not.